TUNE Delete - Mercury
Here's the cliche: 'A trip beyond the universe...'
Here's the reality: Mercury isn't 'beyond the universe', it's right next to the Sun. Also, mercury is too hot to go there so one wonders why you write a song about it.
Either way, this song could have been written in a diving bell, albeit with studio instruments and a reliable power source (either from a localised battery - which would be dangerous - or from a power cable attached to a battery on land - which would be more dangerous).
I hope you like it and I sincerely hhhhhope it doesn't get pushed out of the 'Just released' list on page one within 5 minutes, which is what happened last time something was uploaded.
Grammar for all.